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1. 4 sources
2. The story is about my Aunt Carrie's dentistry. It explains the process leading up to it's purchase and what it's like for her and my Uncle Victor to work it.
3. 25 paragraphs
4. 1659 words
5. 12 quotes
6. 4 people
7. “Sometimes, I will work on a patient who’s been embarrassed of their smile their whole life,” Carrie said. “I have patients whose teeth I fix that will cry and hug me and bring me gifts. That is one of the most rewarding parts of my practice: helping people feel more confident in their self-esteem if they’ve had something that’s bothered them, or if they’ve been in pain and I've been able to help them not hurt anymore.”
8. Around the middle-ish or later
9. It did to me
10. Probably one of the dentists that worked for my Aunt
11. i dont think so
12. How do I add in more information and make the story more descriptive and interesting while lowering my word count, creating a smoother flow, and making it cleaner?
If multiple sources game me multiple angles and a lot of different aspects of information on the same topic, how do I include it all with only one quote to really go deep in that sort of information?
How do I add more quotes from my cousins even though the quotes from my aunt and uncle are just better?
13. Carrie Muzny DDS: A Dive into a Personal Story of a Family Dentistry
14. I am really interested in it, and I love the story, but the writing itself needs work. I want to add more information and more description, but I also want to make it more condense, flow smoother, and feel cleaner. I want to add more quotes from my cousins, but my aunt and uncle just have better ones. I have so much good information from both of them on multiple subjects where they both give their opinion, but I can't really put two quotes for every sort of situation that's like that. There are pieces of information I really wanted to add, but there just wasn't room or a good place.
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